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ReConfusion 3

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This was a dire strip, one of the few pieces of strip art i've done that had no redeeming charm or sparkle to it. J-Mek wrote an OK script which I then proceeded to fuck up immensely turning it into an utter mess. The pacing was dreadful and all over the place with a clunky panel layout. To make matters worse I could'nt even be bothered to re ink the strip and barely cleaned it such was my resentment, this has made the remastered version harder to do.

This taught me so much about how not to make a comic (along with Ben Hardings advice) and just how important self control can be at times. From this point on I always made certain glaringly crap ideas like this were avoided by weeding them out in rough or having J-Mek (or any writer for that matter) tell me that the idea's a bad one. The latter works both ways though, if your writer has created a concept or scene that simply doesn't work for lack of thought or panel space then tell them. Otherwise it's ultimately both your faults for delivering a below standards story.
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aburoYin's avatar
This ones kinda wierd/scary the cells are kinda small, almost claustraphic... good job, progress is awesome.